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Erosion (haiku)

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Erosion (haiku)

Gullies scar brown earth
     Hurricanes bring erosion
          Of both soil and lives

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  1. Date: 1/15/2015 7:08:00 AM
    Humm!! okay...hurricanes soil lives...Hugs! >>>>rajat

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 11:49:00 AM
    Congratulations, Carolyn; wonderful haiku.

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 3:48:00 PM
    Congratulations, Carolyn: How beautifully you have connected the effects of nature on man. Adding this to my favs, SuZ

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 12:52:00 PM
    wow powerful! grats on your win

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 11:36:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 11:00:00 AM
    Yes, Carolyn, this is a 'double' erosion. Hopefully we won't have too many of those in life. Congrats on your fine win. Love and peace. // paul

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 6:33:00 AM
    lovely haiku Carolyn ! So true,, congrats on big win !

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 12:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on the fine win, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/7/2014 11:52:00 PM
    Hi, Carolyn. Good to see you on the winners' list. And congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:23:00 PM
    love this little gem, just want you to know, i'm thinking about you, Carolyn, have a nice festive season...

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 4:54:00 AM
    Wonderful Haiku here Carolyn.Are you better now?-kash

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 1:18:00 PM
    Carolyn, what an awesome haiku you got here. Hope you are enjoying your football weekend my friend. Had a blast with my niece btw ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 3:54:00 PM
    Yes, it is God's way.

  1. Date: 4/10/2010 5:16:00 PM
    Carolyn~ Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2010 7:10:00 AM
    so sad but true carolyn so much said in such few lines congrats on being featured this week also thanks a million for your countless support to all here at P.S. keep up the great work

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 6:29:00 PM
    Congrats on your haiku being featured. You (FLA) have hurricanes, we (PA) have potholes and blizzards. Vince

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 11:52:00 AM
    Congrats on your featured poem this week on Soup .. .. an excellent choice to feature and share...luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 5:52:00 AM
    Hi, Carolyn. Congrats on this Haiku being featured. Hope the hurrcane situation has calmed down. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 2:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Carolyn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 7:43:00 AM
    Congrats Carolyn on your featured poem this week on Soup.. an excellent Haiku to feature and share ...luv.. Linda-Marie..