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Enough With the Chitter Already

As if it’s not enough that I must share this little stump of wood with you, my friend, I have to HEAR you! How much must I bear before you have me going round the bend? Although we are the same birds of a feather, the way you chitter on, I'm turning cuckoo! I can’t believe we still do things together, and this comes keenly from my bird’s eye view! Please don’t be the “little bird that told me!” Go find another bird that “gives a tweet.” You’re going to burst my bird brain, Twiddle Dee. I tweak your beak with one of my clawed feet!
For Francine Robert's Contest: "Enough"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2014 4:39:00 PM
Andrea Such a creative and silly write. I like how you made the bird almost human in its conversation and actions. Nicely done. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Hoarders poem. I am honored you want to Fave it. Hugs
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Andrea. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:18:00 AM
Love this cute one..and so funny for a bird to say bird's eye view..tweaking his beak with her clawed feet...Congrats Andrea on your super win. this contest had such wonderful entries,i missed reading them, yours being one of the finest..have a lovely weekend dear...
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Date: 5/11/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2011 11:00:00 AM
Love this one! great win, many congratulations to you xxx
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:34:00 AM
Many congratulations on all your wins, Andrea : )
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:54:00 AM
This was one of the best!! (Could be a top poem!!) Congratulations, Andrea!!
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:58:00 AM
very well done Andrea. Laughing right along with it....such enjoyable poems this am. love your birdie verbal puns.Congrats to you! Enjoyed much
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Andrea
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Date: 5/10/2011 9:30:00 PM
such an indignant yet charming way to coo, andrea!! boomin cheers for the high win! :)huggs
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:22:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your super big win in Francine's contest with this cute and clever write my friend.. enjoy another big win well deserved for excellence luv..
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:18:00 PM
Good job. Congrats
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:00:00 PM
Dear Andrea, Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2011 3:52:00 PM
Oh my gosh. How fun to read. great job. good rhyme. good rythem.
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:32:00 PM
back heragain... still think its a fun poem.. and cute.. tweet., r you getting ready for tomorrow....p.d.
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Date: 5/6/2011 5:14:00 PM
Haaaaaaa! cool Job your personification, Andrea. Polk salet is a natural growing almost complete meal, that Arkansans eat every spring. It is very tasty treat, and grows wild everywhere in Arkansas. The stalks can be sliced, rolled in flour and fried. The leaves can be boiled and served like Spinach greens. Also taste like Spinach. The stalks taste a bit like fried okra. A very good mild laxative. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:16:00 PM
Nice approach and very creative read of the picture, Andrea
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:06:00 PM
Soup mail!
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:00:00 PM
oh yikety, yikes! that is one spirited bird! heehee! I could just picture that photo that inspired this, Andrea! Really great of giving voice to it ;) -- have to get back to you after I wake up, ok? eek 4am here? I am soo messed up! O_0 hugs to you sweetie :)
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Date: 5/6/2011 12:41:00 PM
Soup mail!! Andrea!
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Date: 5/6/2011 11:30:00 AM
HILARIOUS WRITE for the photo! You have such attitude...I am even afraid of you! 'Great write and a beauty for the contest! I am only gathering my thots for an animal. No clue...I am too busy being a human right now. Congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/6/2011 9:24:00 AM
wowe... love it
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Date: 5/6/2011 7:27:00 AM
A fun but still earnest enough write, Andrea. Parrots are great with mimicing, but it's doubtful they'll know all they say. You're wise, Andrea...who are those people coming into "who is online", that have no name or poetry? Yesterday I felt brattish and started commenting to one...then a poem appeared..lol It was a first poem of that whoever...but seconds before it was given a vague comment...now I'm as curious as ever Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/6/2011 6:41:00 AM
Definitely sharp claws in this one. Lots of good humor too. Love, daver
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Date: 5/6/2011 3:34:00 AM
* “Sooo Very & Funny” * but perhaps maybe not for the one being a bit perturbed possibly yet * late last eve i heard a pretty bird talking outside my window * i smiled because i always try to behold the connection between * “All of Creation” * and then in my minds eye i turn and i blow it back into * “The Skies of Heaven” * where it all truly belongs * “Lovely Poem Beautiful Andrea” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah
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