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Enjoying the Rain

The sky is white, sure sign of rain The flowers are straining their heads ready, for the first refrain of the musical splashes, as they sprinkle the flower bed I am here I am here they seem to say please shower me with moisture so I can live and bloom for the gardener, who lovingly spends time to make a glorious picture. Who else is waiting for those bursts of rain the birds in the treetops, because they know worms will show there shiny heads, before burrowing back into the ground below. Mostly the raindrops are enjoyed by the people who love to walk enjoying the petals strewn with raindrops, making a water fountains for the birds to shower and quench their thirst, to sing a new tune.

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Date: 4/19/2013 2:22:00 PM
love this, Seren - awesome descriptions. Congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:23:00 AM
A lovely piece so well composed and rendered. You have alliteration, assonance, enjambment, fine phrasing, neat rhyming and vivid imagery! BRAVO Seren!! Best wishes, Keith
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/19/2013 11:49:00 AM
Diolch yn fawr Keith, thank you, I am smiling at the words you have written, did I do all that without knowing it, wow clever me. Thanks for calling in...Seren
Date: 4/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
Wow Seren,, you are so positive, your poetry so inspiring, you'd be amazed how folk like me, need what folk like you write, let it continue Angel of Wales, i may not be commenting so much these days, which is a shame when i see your poetry...........!!!!!!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/18/2013 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Harry, I wont be here either, well not so much.... Seren
Date: 4/18/2013 6:53:00 AM
This is truly a beautiful and wondrous write my friend! You have enlightened me by the splendor of this marvelous poem! I really enjoyed reading this incredible piece this morning! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/18/2013 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Russell, glad you enjoyed it...Seren

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