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enjoying the rain

The sky is white, sure sign of rain
The flowers are straining their heads
ready,  for the first refrain of the musical
splashes, as they sprinkle the flower bed

I am here I am here they seem to say
please shower me with moisture
so I can live and bloom for the gardener,
who lovingly spends time to make a glorious picture.

Who else is waiting for those bursts of rain
the birds in the treetops, because they know 
worms will show there shiny heads, before
burrowing back into the ground below.

Mostly the raindrops are enjoyed by the people 
who love to walk enjoying the petals strewn 
with raindrops, making a water fountains for the birds 
to shower and quench their thirst, to sing a new tune.

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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 2:22:00 PM
    love this, Seren - awesome descriptions. Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:23:00 AM
    A lovely piece so well composed and rendered. You have alliteration, assonance, enjambment, fine phrasing, neat rhyming and vivid imagery! BRAVO Seren!! Best wishes, Keith

    Date: 4/19/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Diolch yn fawr Keith, thank you, I am smiling at the words you have written, did I do all that without knowing it, wow clever me. Thanks for calling in...Seren
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Wow Seren,, you are so positive, your poetry so inspiring, you'd be amazed how folk like me, need what folk like you write, let it continue Angel of Wales, i may not be commenting so much these days, which is a shame when i see your poetry...........!!!!!!!!

    Date: 4/18/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry, I wont be here either, well not so much.... Seren
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 6:53:00 AM
    This is truly a beautiful and wondrous write my friend! You have enlightened me by the splendor of this marvelous poem! I really enjoyed reading this incredible piece this morning! Great Work!!

    Date: 4/18/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell, glad you enjoyed it...Seren