Engulfing Doom

Hear the tale of a beautiful woman
A story told should be forbidden
She falls asleep quickly
And lies in her bed neatly
Beautiful colors she sees ahead...

Interrupted by a mysterious view
It summons her to a mountain stream
She notices an aroma, intense in her dream
The smell lingers on
Her presence she fears does not belong
Sensations felt from above her head
She cannot relinquish this feeling as of yet

Looks behind but her senses deny
Terrified, she turns to hide
The force is too strong for her to run
Trying to awake, she could do none
Inhaling, exhaling down her back it moves
She sees it now, black, dark and absurd
She knows this could only be one thing 
An engulfing doom, a shadow encircling her room

It is a ghoul her mind conjures
Trying to take her soul for sure
Suddenly her phone rings,
She returns from her slumber
Awake and barely aware
She drops the phone and looks above
Realizing it is still there....

©Holly P. Moore
   November 26, 2012

"Waking Up" Contest Entry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/21/2013 8:28:00 PM
This was so entertaining, it pulled me in and felt the fear with her. great write Holly, Blessings, Bernard
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Date: 12/13/2012 6:36:00 PM
A hard to shake dream. Congatulations Holly. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/13/2012 2:05:00 PM
Very scary one here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2012 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Holly. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2012 3:01:00 AM
Holly big congrats on your win...David
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Holly love xx
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Date: 12/12/2012 11:53:00 PM
Amazing write Holly! I love the air of mystery, in that although awake from her dream the events still follow her around -chilling. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/12/2012 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Holly! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/1/2012 10:41:00 AM
wow what a powerful piece! It grips the reader and pulls them in! You are very talented!! thanks for sharing! I really like the ending of the poem it is surreal like the author can not escape this vision! I love it!!!
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:04:00 PM
OOOoooohhh....Spooky! A very intence write.It was very gripping...
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:50:00 AM
Very chilling write here holly, my best wishes too you in contest, hope it scares its way to the top of the rope... Fantastic all my love my friend Carma
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:58:00 AM
Love it Holly, very well written. - I have post you a S-mail. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:30:00 AM
Holly very well done, this is so much better....David I have just souped you..
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Date: 11/25/2012 1:39:00 PM
Chilling write! Whatever you ate before bed that night I would avoid it in the future. Hope this was a fictional poem. It was a very enjoyable read. Sweet dreams.
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Date: 11/25/2012 12:11:00 PM
soup mail....
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Date: 11/25/2012 9:47:00 AM
get the pepper spray,lol,great write Holly
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Date: 11/25/2012 8:34:00 AM
Cool piece my dear friend... well done.. love dream writes... Hugs Michael
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