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Endless Salt Water

He stands in the rain And looks out over the sea Endless salt water Trickles down his cheeks as he Remembers the love they had For Andrea’s Salt contest

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/14/2013 7:53:00 PM

Very beautiful Jack, you captured much in this short form poem.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/11/2013 3:44:00 PM

Congrats on the selection. daver

Karen Anglesey

Date: 11/10/2013 12:14:00 PM

Bittersweet and salty indeed. Fantastic imagery. Found your poem on "Featured Poem of the Week". Congrats :)

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 11:55:00 AM

Hey Jack my friend. How areyou? *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 7:23:00 PM

Jack, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2013 11:25:00 AM

grreay work, jack..happy cheers to you for your win!..:) huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2013 8:14:00 AM

Great winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/5/2013 8:45:00 PM

Salt water tears. Nice imagery, Jack.

David Fisher

Date: 11/5/2013 6:05:00 PM

This is so well done and thought out! Congrats on the win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/5/2013 3:33:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/5/2013 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations Jack on your sad poem and a winner. Love, Joyce

Donna Jones

Date: 11/5/2013 10:19:00 AM

This is beautiful..congratulations Jack

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/5/2013 9:00:00 AM

so sad, but very beautifully expressed. congratulations on a well-deserved win!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/5/2013 8:13:00 AM

I think this is brilliant Jack, congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2013 7:43:00 AM

WOW, Jack, this is impressive, and not your usual humorous poem! Congrats on your first place win! soupmail.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/27/2013 1:50:00 PM

Such a sad write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a remarkable piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!