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Endless Salt Water

He stands in the rain

And looks out over the sea

Endless salt water 

Trickles down his cheeks as he

Remembers the love they had



For Andrea’s Salt contest

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2013

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Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 12/14/2013 7:53:00 PM Very beautiful Jack, you captured much in this short form poem. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 11/11/2013 3:44:00 PM Congrats on the selection. daver Login to Reply

Karen Anglesey Date: 11/10/2013 12:14:00 PM Bittersweet and salty indeed. Fantastic imagery. Found your poem on "Featured Poem of the Week". Congrats :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 11/7/2013 11:55:00 AM Hey Jack my friend. How areyou? *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/6/2013 7:23:00 PM Jack, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/6/2013 11:25:00 AM grreay work, jack..happy cheers to you for your win!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2013 8:14:00 AM Great winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 11/5/2013 8:45:00 PM Salt water tears. Nice imagery, Jack. Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 11/5/2013 6:05:00 PM This is so well done and thought out! Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/5/2013 3:33:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 11/5/2013 11:00:00 AM Congratulations Jack on your sad poem and a winner. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 11/5/2013 10:19:00 AM This is beautiful..congratulations Jack Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 11/5/2013 9:00:00 AM so sad, but very beautifully expressed. congratulations on a well-deserved win! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/5/2013 8:13:00 AM I think this is brilliant Jack, congrats. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/5/2013 7:43:00 AM WOW, Jack, this is impressive, and not your usual humorous poem! Congrats on your first place win! soupmail. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 10/27/2013 1:50:00 PM Such a sad write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a remarkable piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply