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Endless Admiration

kissing golden sands in endless admiration accursed by the moon a sweet surrender caught in stoic web of time joy reigns eternal waves hug sand sweetly serenades ‘Would you be my valentine?’ ~*~ For PD's sponsored contest: "(Double) Haiku and One Questionku" 01/30/13

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Skat A

Date: 12/3/2015 1:16:00 AM

Annalise, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2013 8:51:00 PM

Congratulations, Annalise, for your well deserved win. I remember this one well!!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/17/2013 3:53:00 PM

Beautiful piece,great friend.Congratulations on your superb win in this comtest.And thanks for stopping by my poems and for your comments.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/16/2013 11:18:00 PM

just lovely, many congrats on your win in the contest Annalise

Joseph May

Date: 2/16/2013 7:25:00 PM

congrats on a great win Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2013 1:57:00 PM

ANNALISE, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

Sean L Sanders

Date: 1/31/2013 5:48:00 AM

Wow, thats all I'll say. I'm still litsenning.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2013 10:37:00 PM

Very nice, Annalise. Now I know why I am seeing these two haiku/questionku poems. I did not realize there was a contest for them but you were good enough to mention that at the bottom of your entry. PD will be so pleased with yours.