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True love, my dear, is marvelous and rare. Its flame burns strong, passions never veering. Hopes drift upon life’s dreams while lovers dare. Fantasies everlastingly raving -- Embracing destiny without roving. Joy rises as reality draws near. Melting in ecstasy each evening. Inviting our future together dear. Anticipating wedding bells’ sweet ring Forever shall we snuggle in life’s den. Each tomorrow shall be shared endeavoring. Knowing that the love we hold has no end. June 4, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Word Games Contest Sponsor Catie Lindsey

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Date: 6/26/2012 6:49:00 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Dane Ann. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2012 9:46:00 AM
Lovely poem Dane Ann...congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/6/2012 7:31:00 PM
DANE, Congratulations with your wonderful win, In CATIE'S contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
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Date: 6/6/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congrats. A very lovely poem...Tanya
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Date: 6/6/2012 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann xx
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Word Games" contest Dane Ann. Great to see you posting and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2012 1:47:00 AM
Dane Ann congrats on your win..David
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