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End of Days

war between nations rivers overflow with blood -- the earth convulses a crimson sky glows meteorites fall like rain -- hearts fill with terror stars fall from the sky darkness overcomes the earth -- screams fade to nothing end of days has come -- all life has been extinguished the earth is no more written June 19, 2012 for Gail Doyle's The End of the World/Armageddon contest.

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Date: 7/12/2012 7:54:00 PM
AWESOME WRIGHT,,,,, you have a blessed day ;}
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:56:00 PM
congrats on your top win, kim!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:17:00 PM
Such a well scripted four part SENRYU this is! The urgent message flows perfectly through each verse, ending with '...the earth is no more.' Chilling! BRAVO Kim!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:46:00 AM
A wonderful write Kim, congratulations on you 1st place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Armageddon" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done....Tanya
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Date: 6/22/2012 11:04:00 AM
This is a beaut! congrats Kim on your first place. BG
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Date: 6/21/2012 8:11:00 PM
yours reads very well, like the way it is shown in scriptures. Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Date: 6/20/2012 6:26:00 AM
Good work Kim, wish you luck in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/19/2012 9:05:00 PM
WEll done. I have a series of these from an older contest a year ago that was almost exactly the same theme. It kills me I can't reuse those old poems. I just can't think of any other way to repeat my same ideas in haiku form!!
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:17:00 PM
VERY scary! Good luck in the contest, Kim <3
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