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Enchanting Invite

Stop, smell the roses and take your time.
Drop your guard and open your prosaic mind.
Walk under a shower of fresh rain.
Look up beyond the common plains.

Up in the sky sets a big beautiful rainbow.
Take in the beauty, drop off your mental cargo.

Feel the breeze of the wind as it leaves no trace.
Soak up the rays of the sun beaming upon your face.

Lay out a blanket, in the middle of a flowered field.
Close your eyes, whelm up the smells it yields.

Nature rendered you into a peaceful slumber.
Enchantingly inviting you back into her chamber.

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  1. Date: 9/8/2009 5:30:00 AM
    just beautiful---Charma

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 6:20:00 PM
    Delightful, absolutely spellbinding write, Erin. This one goes to my favs... Fantastic! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 9:20:00 AM
    Erin, living life to the fullest as you describe allows you to enjoy a peaceful slumber at night and look forward to the next day. Many beautiful images here! (And I cannot bring myself to erase Dad's last voice mail. When I finish moving, it will be gone.) God bless your sweet heart and Happy Friendship Week! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 6:43:00 AM
    Enchanted is the proper name....your poem is truly enchanting!! :) ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 11:28:00 PM
    you had me hooked when you used rain in here. enjoyed how you expressed it so well. enjoy your night. :)