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Empty Walls of a Once Filled Life

In the choas we new order in nights we new the emptyness of a once filled apartment. The laughter ,The seldom thought voice in a queit storm. Bare now are the walls I cant recall. Like a ghost that huants us in a dream it's faded into just another day of a endless moment's. And in anothers hands maybe you'll grow like vision. Instead of reamaning as my soul and cold dead earth. Maybe it's a scene none can recall. Or maybe there just to scared to see themselves in failures grasp. Maybe I should have never closed that door. Light chases life into the corners of my empty room Bare as my words some doors should never be opened again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 1:17:00 AM
So glad to be reading you here again,John. .All the best for the coming New Year,alwaysC.C
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Date: 12/26/2010 1:39:00 PM
John, how about giving me the link to the pub,,,,had to boot my puter,, and when i try the pub it takes me to other sites,..p.d.
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:06:00 PM
what a sad & haunting poem this is-- each stanza just makes me feel that sadness-- promise to drop by your writes more often-- sorry I don't get to drop by as often -- thank you for your inspiring comments John ^_^ nikko :)
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Date: 12/5/2010 7:09:00 PM
Hello, John long time no see- read- or bump into you. Nice read deep,, hope you get my mail ~ALWAYS Irma
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