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Empty Sounds

The long night hours of waking That haunt my very soul The reaper stands before me And beckons me be told The people stand behind me With words of empty sounds Promises of everything But nothing to be found The rusty wheels are turning Of work that should be done The people here, Im learning Know fools that walk as one Where are the ones I trusted I stand so much alone With words and empty meanings And a heart that’s turned to stone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/17/2010 8:36:00 PM
Reminds me of zombies..............
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:31:00 PM
Nice write...those long lonely night hours of waking made me think of lonely sounds of train whistles in the night ...lol...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:37:00 PM
You capture an eery and haunting mood with this one. I think it is great! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:48:00 PM
Loneliness well depicted. Wish it weren't so.
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:22:00 AM
Oh, that's so sad. Nice rhyming pattern. Thanks for sharing.
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