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Empty Jar of Pickles

I eat one then two,
An empty jar of pickles;
A guilty pleasure.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:34:00 PM
    Yuchers, oh my Abe - the thought of them gives me the shivers>>James

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 2:23:00 PM
    Ha ha! Everyone loves pickles! But we must watch the salt : ) Thanks Abe so much for stopping by with your thoughtful comment. Miss it here very much. I hope to be back soon, but I am almost afraid to jinx myself by saying it! Be well. Hugs, Shar

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 11:44:00 AM
    Nice...... I would give it a 100000000000000 but they dont have it on the scale

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 11:24:00 AM
    i like this senryu- nice write.

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 11:16:00 AM
    i like pickles and your poem great job

  1. Date: 2/16/2009 3:58:00 PM
    LOL Yep, this is funny. Also one I can relate too. A vice I hide. UM UM to those jars of delicious pickles. I don't like the sweet pickles but I love dill. Great Senryu, Abe. Love Christie

  1. Date: 2/16/2009 3:21:00 PM
    This is a wonderful Senyru, Abe. Great imagery and humor. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 7:34:00 PM
    Wonderful Senry Happy V Day. Love E.

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 7:16:00 PM
    I don't like pickles but I like this senryu. Good job.................Danielle

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 7:11:00 PM
    I agree with your Senryu, I love eating pickles too. It's not guilty, it's just a pleasure to eat them.

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 7:02:00 PM
    I love eating pickles, it's my guilty pleasure also. Nice poem Abe. Tyler

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 6:54:00 PM Pickles are my favorite and I too eat the whole jar. DN

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 6:10:00 PM
    great senryu..........i love pickels lol see ya monday,Christina

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 7:52:00 AM
    uncontrolable and inconsolable all in one sitting. jhl

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 3:54:00 AM
    Nice senryu, I know what it's like to say I am going to drink only 1 soda and before I know it, I have over done it. Moderation is the key, but not for me...Raul

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 12:39:00 AM
    Very good and amusing senryu Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/13/2009 11:30:00 PM
    You sillyhead if thats the worst guilty pleasure you enjoy you're darned near poifect! Laurie

  1. Date: 2/13/2009 8:49:00 PM
    Nice write, the title caught my eyes..I can relate to this, You have a craving, you tell yourself you are just going to have one, then you have two or three more and before you know it, it's all gone.LOL..Nicely done*Tyesha

  1. Date: 2/13/2009 8:00:00 PM
    Very clever write! :) Made me grin... my little girl would love this one. She can empty a jar of pickles in no time! LOL God bless, Amy :)