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Empty Bottle

Taking me down To the fields of green Along the brightest star I've ever seen Wait by the water Till it hits the shore To find an empty bottle Nothing more Name: Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson Written: July 12, 2010 Contest: The Unwritten

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/3/2011 7:39:00 AM

Scarlett, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;-)

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson
Date: 7/3/2011 12:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Wilma. I'm pleasantly surprised. I dont get to communicate with you guys as much cuz my computer is down. It was so great to hear from my old friends here at poetrysoup.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2011 4:58:00 AM

Congrats Scarlett on your second place win with this intense poetry..how have u been luv? hope u are celebrating the 4th in style...with luv..

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson
Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 PM

Hello Ms Sweetheart - thank you for your kind comments. Been doing ok but am in the hospital right now. They have wi-fi woohoo! :) Getting my computer fixed soon so I can get back to my old friends here at poetrysoup. Hope your weekend is a great one!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/18/2010 9:33:00 AM

Lovely written, enjoyed the reado today! Carry on with your good job! And thanks for your kind commenton "Roadside" I also posted it on my facebook album with a photo!...Have a nice week!...Gert

James Fraser

Date: 7/13/2010 3:14:00 PM

An empty bottle with no story to tell, where it came from, where has it been. Poetry at it's best Scarlett >> James

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/13/2010 5:24:00 AM

I enjoyed this write, especially the visuals you have created, enjoy your day Wilma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/13/2010 5:07:00 AM

inspired me to see a new poem for today! thanks!!

Tyler Jones

Date: 7/12/2010 6:55:00 PM

great poem, it projected great imagery for me, optimisticaly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2010 6:36:00 PM

I'm with Boy Toy here, Kool write!

Phil Boy

Date: 7/12/2010 6:30:00 PM

kool write! b. boy

Rinki Nandy

Date: 7/12/2010 6:01:00 PM

you have provided the reader with the authority to decide! n i admire that idea....giving every reader an opprtunity to think! n thanks much for your encouragng remarks on smiley..GOd bless.