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Empty Baby

What sort of life Is taken away Without a word Without a say From a life unknown Unsewn to her side Just left to slide Into an unknown tomb Ripped from the womb That lies empty Surrounded by plenty Of long, happy lives So we strive To burn our hurt, our rage Turn over another page And move on from the grief Spilt out from that brief Elapse of time But I don’t feel fine, Or know how to remember How to dismember This event from my mind And I yearn to find A memory to create And abate These feelings that I’ve left you alone On your own With no love surrounding you No future to renew No reality born Just torn From our empty lives I’m so sorry (I will never forget you)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/22/2009 7:42:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/19/2009 2:48:00 PM
This is a sad but brilliant poem. Nobody would be expected to forget a loss like this. God knows that. We're not made to forget and act like bad things don't happen; but to remember that bad things don't happen all the time. I love your poem and it certainly deserved to be featured.
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 9:25:00 AM
Gareth, Congratulations on having your insightful poem featured this week. Ripped by choice or ripped by nature, the loss lingers for a lifetime. There may be less guilt when nature does the ripping. But the pain and thoughts remain unforgotten just the same. Only new life and the business of childrearing can offer the hurt a morsel of comfort. And then, those thoughts come again, but a little less frequently. God give you peace. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 8/18/2009 7:09:00 AM
Heartfelt and heart wrenching poem. Well deserved feature. All the best, Krista
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Date: 8/17/2009 10:19:00 AM
Excellent, although sorrowful - congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gareth. Love Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:04:00 PM
No one does ever forget the lose. Hugs Light & Love
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