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i cat explain it this feeling of hurt inside is to much to bare as if someone or somthing was taken away from me

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/2/2009 8:17:00 AM

i can relate to that hollow feeling echoing in your soul..you will survive it all--Char,ma

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/24/2009 6:14:00 PM

Hi Bree - Thanks for the comments - I can relate to this poem - for many years I made choices that cost me the ones that I loved the most - People closest to me have betrayed me in the past - it all just came with the life I had chosen for myself - These days all that seems like a distant dream to me - Loved your poem hon - mj

Logan Saucillo

Date: 11/24/2009 12:36:00 PM

the hole inside is the pain that hurts the most. read my take on this very thought, "buried at sea." i just wrote it today! you must've been reading my mind.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2009 11:11:00 AM

Yes the hole in the soul kinda feeling. There is an answer. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara