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Embracing His Wrath

The great deceiver picks one To manipulate and bare his son. Something goes wrong, she won't have it So she runs away from his havoc She refuses to commit to his will He curses her to the Island Seal A place to give in to the evil Where she meets a man named Cecil The evil one under a mask To deceive is his ultimate task Through his eyes she can tell Looking through unmasking hell In his furious anger he breaks her neck Her soul is lifted to her lord ship Her body is given a second chance Without recollection of this dance He places her under angel guards Marking her under the stars Her torment will not go unseen If she goes back she will...scream

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Date: 2/25/2009 12:30:00 PM
I like the journey. Not sure of the outcome or the villian "She refuses to commit to his will" I sugest SUBMIT/commit. And perhaps "as man to her he revels" Cecil? Why? Is it a retelling of a Silky Tale? "In his furious anger he breaks her neck/ Her soul is lifted to her Lord shipWRECK.."He places her under angel guards/ Marking her under the stars" Is this he "lord" or the evil one? Which her is under guard the body or the soul? Light & Love Debbie..too good not to work more on!
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