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Ellen's Blues

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Please
show me
what is love,
show me the way
to a yearning heart
before this feeling dies
fades in to oblivion,
I believe in love just show me
please show me the way to Ellen’s heart!

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Steve Humphries Artist Date: 2/25/2013 3:38:00 AM Really like the structure, good to see someone chasing love with such emotion! Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/22/2013 11:05:00 AM This is a nice poem with true feelings. I heard once that - love is never having to say - I'm sorry. Thanks for sharing and for reading The Game of Life. Lucilla Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/21/2013 7:47:00 PM nicely penned Harry....thanks for stopping by... Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 2/21/2013 2:00:00 PM Very cool, Harry.....might have to try one of those. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 2/21/2013 10:26:00 AM Harry; I love this; the flow and especially the end. Enjoyed this. Hope you are doing good ;) Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 2/21/2013 9:51:00 AM Your Ellen can never deny because after she comes to know, she will fall in love without doubt. Nice heart touchable one. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 2/21/2013 6:25:00 AM Good one Harry... will Ellen be seeing this? If she does, she will be over the moon! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/21/2013 5:11:00 AM I am sure Ellen's heart will open for you harry if she is real, and she will be bowled over by this. xx Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 2/21/2013 2:34:00 AM This is very touching Harry...I'm sure she would love this.And thanks for the comment on my two grey hairs of wisdom..Brought me a :o) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/20/2013 10:45:00 PM very sweet and who is Ellen? She must be a lucky lady!!! I enjoyed seeing a new poem from you today, especially one as nice as this nonet. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/20/2013 1:41:00 PM This poem is a great start *lol* Good luck my friend. I like the new photo. Mine is like my haircut it never changes. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/20/2013 1:13:00 PM This little gem is one way, Harry. Make sure she reads it!! Good to see you took a break. Take care, my friend! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/20/2013 9:26:00 AM Lovely, Harry! Simply superb! Login to Reply

Cynthia Alvez Date: 2/20/2013 9:22:00 AM Ah! Divine ... Send this verse with roses...I say. Cynthia Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 2/20/2013 7:35:00 AM Lovely...sincerity is usually the key...loved the poem harry Login to Reply