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Ellen's Blues

Reverse Nonet Please show me what is love, show me the way to a yearning heart before this feeling dies fades in to oblivion, I believe in love just show me please show me the way to Ellen’s heart! © Harry J Horsman 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Steve Humphries Artist
Date: 2/25/2013 3:38:00 AM
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Really like the structure, good to see someone chasing love with such emotion!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/22/2013 11:05:00 AM
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This is a nice poem with true feelings. I heard once that - love is never having to say - I'm sorry. Thanks for sharing and for reading The Game of Life. Lucilla
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Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2013 7:47:00 PM
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nicely penned Harry....thanks for stopping by...
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Painted Hunter
Date: 2/21/2013 2:00:00 PM
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Very cool, Harry.....might have to try one of those.
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Wilma Neels
Date: 2/21/2013 10:26:00 AM
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Harry; I love this; the flow and especially the end. Enjoyed this. Hope you are doing good ;)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/21/2013 9:51:00 AM
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Your Ellen can never deny because after she comes to know, she will fall in love without doubt. Nice heart touchable one. Loved always, bl
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/21/2013 6:25:00 AM
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Good one Harry... will Ellen be seeing this? If she does, she will be over the moon!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/21/2013 5:11:00 AM
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I am sure Ellen's heart will open for you harry if she is real, and she will be bowled over by this. xx
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/21/2013 2:34:00 AM
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This is very touching Harry...I'm sure she would love this.And thanks for the comment on my two grey hairs of wisdom..Brought me a :o)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/20/2013 10:45:00 PM
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very sweet and who is Ellen? She must be a lucky lady!!! I enjoyed seeing a new poem from you today, especially one as nice as this nonet.
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John Loving Iii
Date: 2/20/2013 7:39:00 PM
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Tell her. And if she doesn't crush you proceed to step 2.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2013 1:41:00 PM
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This poem is a great start *lol* Good luck my friend. I like the new photo. Mine is like my haircut it never changes.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 2/20/2013 1:13:00 PM
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This little gem is one way, Harry. Make sure she reads it!! Good to see you took a break. Take care, my friend! Always, Annalise
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/20/2013 9:26:00 AM
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Lovely, Harry! Simply superb!
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Cynthia Alvez
Date: 2/20/2013 9:22:00 AM
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Ah! Divine ... Send this verse with roses...I say. Cynthia
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/20/2013 7:35:00 AM
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Lovely...sincerity is usually the key...loved the poem harry
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