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Elinor The Real Mind Inside

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Elinor The Real Mind Inside

 
I want to wright something light I'm sick of all this darkness Maybe if i wright something light i will feel lightheaded all this darkness in my mind weighs me down i wan to wright something light STOPPED CHILD DON'T YOU KNOW LIGHT CAN NEVER PENETRATE INTO THE DEPTH OF ARE SOUL Elinore wishers behind my ear SOME HOW she says YOU HAVE SLIPPED FROM MY NOSE FOUND A WORLD WERE FREEDOM COMES NATURALLY LIKE THE BIRDS FLY AND THE BUZZ ON THE BEES I love the way the bees buzz and birds fly this freedom that is alive i reply SILL BODY she spits back YOUR NOTHING BUT A PUPPET THAT'S BROKEN ITS STRINGS but we are one are we not a jackal and hide in the same mind STOPPED GIRL she replays YOUR NOTHING BUT A BODY AND I'M THE MIND INSIDE we share a soul like you said and with out this body you mind could never thrive DO NOT TRY AND PLAY THIS GAME OF TWISTED WORLDS I CONTRAIL WHAT THIS BODY DOUSE YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A HEART BEATS WHISPER THAT PLAYS ON REPEAT

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 10:23:00 AM
    GOOD