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Elemental Feelings

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Below is the poem entitled Elemental Feelings which was written by poet Caroline Lohrey. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Elemental Feelings

Looking into the rain, feeling it on my face.
Dancing in the sun, the warmth on my back.
Running into the wind, it takes away my breath.
Laughing in the snow, feeling the cold down to my toes.
Falling into the leaves, hearing them crunch in my ear.
Smiling at the flowers, feeling their soft petals on my fingertips.
Winking at the moon, tasting the glow on my tongue.
Watching the clouds, lying on my back.
Counting the stars, and having to restart every time.
Climbing the trees, feeling the rough bark on my hands.
Relaxing on the grass, the green blades ticking my skin.
Catching the bugs, Feeling the slimy worms wiggle 
Swimming in the ponds, the fish nibbling on my toes.
Loving this wonderful world I live in.

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  1. Date: 1/8/2009 5:14:00 PM
    nice work liked it a lot....Maryam

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 11:49:00 AM
    NIce i like

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 3:50:00 AM
    Caroline, Very well thought out poem the message flows through the readers veins YOU have great future in POETRY a word of advice when YOU write the form of YOUR POEMS YOU should try to stay away from "I do not know" as YOU lose favor in any POETRYSOUP Contest Free Verse is always an option until YOU learn all the many forms of POETRY Again Welcome TO POETRYSOUP I shall follow YOUR POETIC career LOVEYOUr POETIC Spirit...HG

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 10:18:00 AM
    I really like this poem because it made me think to when I was a kid with no worries. And thank you for taking time to read my poem.

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 9:45:00 AM
    Super title! You sustain the '-ing' verbs beautifully. Again, a lot of thought went into this and it shows... Best wishes, Keith (PS welcome to the Soup!)