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Ego Elevator

Stop by for a six-pack of beer
‘Hello!’ Smiles the pretty cashier
‘May I see your ID?
(Are you KIDDING me?
You just made my day AND my year!)

‘Store policy’ She says with a blush
(Is she FLIRTING? Does she have a crush?)
Intuition grows crisper
When I hear a soft whisper
‘Anyway, are you in a big rush?’

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Definitely flirting,,, very cute...

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:53:00 AM
    I love this, Tim!!! You have got to be one of the most creative poets on here. Your humour and attention to detail get me everytime. I went to the liquor store the other day with a few friends - I didn't even buy anything and I was still carded! And in Canada the legal drinking age is 19. Sheesh.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:53:00 AM
    Love the title! And the words thereafter. You nailed the limerick form! :) PS, I am indeed a songwriter! And singer. Thanks for stopping by again, I appreciate it! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Quite imaginitive .

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:20:00 AM
    Such a flirt you are cher...thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 5:17:00 PM
    LOL....this is great Tim! Cashier making her own sale : )

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:50:00 PM
    About your Limerick, you have to know this happens to my all the time when buying a six pack of beer... LOL, JK...I don't drink beer, just hard liquor... LOL teasing you again. The cashiers are always carding me when buying teens their beer... LOL, JK...Okay I will stop, anyways.... and hopefully she does dig you. Flirting is good for the soul... SO I HEARD... :-)... have yourself a nice day.. xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:46:00 PM
    wow, that was very nice of you, stopping by my latest poem. It was an honor in having you read one of my poems. thank you very much. God bless.... Linda

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:07:00 AM
    Tim...are you a lady's man?...hehe. Cool limerick....and, well....leaves something for the imagination.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:41:00 PM
    you must tell me Tim where the store is,,, love your limericks...

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Hey Tim cool Limerick, doing well, thanks for comment, "PS" Agape Moses

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Hahaha, love it. Thanks for the laugh! :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 2:47:00 PM
    downright witty, tim.. so nice of you to send happy comeback greetings.. thanks and huggs.. see you soon!..:)

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:11:00 PM
    She has good taste and you write wild rhyme; between the two I feel ruffled. what else went on? Fun write Tim, always great to visit! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 2:55:00 AM
    Hahaha this was great! Quick, witty and to the point... that's how I like my limericks! I wonder if this is a true story or not...

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 12:31:00 AM
    Tim, with a title like this l just had to read this one, l get excited when being asked to provide proof l am a senior for a discount. Lol. Loved this snappy Lemerick!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:50:00 PM
    I like this ; Did she really make your day? You must really look young. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 2:15:00 PM
    hahaha. A bit of wishful thinking there. I laughed top to bottom on this one. Good writing, Tim. :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:27:00 AM
    this is funny Tim..loved it!! (and this has happened to me does make your day!!) luv,Deb