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Egged On

Your lily white skin belies 
the cracked visage required for your attainment.
You spread, all to willingly, upon my black heat.
The edges of you curling with unseemly delight.
And while my iron heart holds many things above you,
only you arrive unfertilized, virginal to my frame.
The core of you quivering, liquid, wet, responsive to my firmness.
Just a cook's tool, am I, but I too have needs.
And once your fragile, white has crisped to brown
and you have flipped for some one else,
do me a favor, take your sunny-side up self and leave,
cast off from my caste iron self.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:47:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:27:00 AM
    love all those double meanings ....... dead sexy and very humorous.... it is up to your highest standards Deb....well done girl....... best wishes ..... Syd

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:18:00 AM
    I'll never look at an egg the same way BG

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 1:41:00 AM
    Debbie, congrats on your win, loved it..David

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 3:05:00 PM
    Very clever Debbie. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 2:02:00 PM
    Wow, that's one hot egg you are frying up! Congrats on your win. Love, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Words can draw so many images, and your are always so well done. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 9:58:00 AM
    Debbie - never though of the frying pan feeling rejected. This is really clever. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 7:50:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning....patrick