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Eggcellent Way

The hen before she eggpires wants to Egghume all wrongs, eggpiate what Are possible, ask living Forgiveness, before her Eggodus from earth She eggudes Forgiveness Toward All Sponsor:Black Eyed Susan Contest:Eggs, but no epulaeryus

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 6/19/2012 3:14:00 AM

I love how you've put this. Forgiveness and redemption is definitely a recommended passage in the 'eggcellent way'. Congrats on your win Sara!

David Williams

Date: 6/19/2012 1:53:00 AM

Sara congrats on your great win...David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/18/2012 3:34:00 PM

Well done. Could have been the top winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2012 11:34:00 AM

Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/18/2012 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2012 8:19:00 AM

wow,I LOVE how you did yours. It is EGGScellently clever! Susan really should love it. No yolk!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/14/2012 8:14:00 PM

I had to reread this a couple of times to really understand it.forgiveness will always set you free, because in it there's truth..and in truth there's always a promise for better days to come.great write it says a lot. Hope you had a good day so far! ~always&forever

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2012 8:06:00 PM

enjoyed your interesting wordplay, sara.. very creative... best wishes and huggs!:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/14/2012 7:22:00 PM

This is quite the interesting write my friend! I really enjoyed the way you wrote this poem! This is a delightful write Sara! Great Work!!