Eden

As our world lies in havoc 
she waits deep in the inticingly 
dark forest 
she glances upon us
though to her we are but a 
bleak glimmer of misery on the 
horizon
our world begins to crumble 
our oceans dry and turn to 
puddles 
and the earth cracks and 
begins to break away below 
our feet
and as we starve
she picks ripe succulent fruits 
from lush strong vines 
she plunges her teeth through 
the skin 
and flavorful juices roll down 
her tongue
she runs and plays throughout 
the forest and skips through 
rolling streams 
and the sound of her wet feet 
slapping on rocks echo's 
through the woods
she cherishes every thing in 
her world 
while the brutal few still in ours 
ravage what is left of it 
they victimize the weak and 
weary
for them to survive is to fight 
is to kill 
while the weaker waste away 
or survive by taking from the 
corpses that litter the earth 
burned crisp by the seering sun
but she sings enchantingly 
through the black mass of thick 
trees
and dances elegantly with fire 
flies
for years she watches us with 
little intrest 
until one intensely dark night 
she looks upon our world and 
thinks this could be a sad 
shame
but she never feels sadness 
and she knows that everything 
happens for a reason.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/15/2013 6:06:00 AM
A gr8 poem and i like the reference to Eden. We believe we have to till d earthly garden well if we r to enjoy d garden of Eden. Fab way u have put it in freeverse pal.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/22/2012 4:17:00 PM
Very touching work of art Joanna. I can only imagine the amount of despair and intutaiveness you had while writing this poem. I can very much relate to this poem and the feeling that lies beneath the surface.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2012 11:17:00 AM
Deep write here, Joanna! Gave me chills
Login to Reply
Date: 3/26/2011 1:23:00 AM
VERY TOUCHING hey just so you are aware next time you come on i replied to your forum post under need to talk and then carey!?!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/22/2010 6:28:00 PM
very moving peace loved the flow and the meaning please read some of my pomes on here and tell me how to make them better your writing is moving and graffic yet so free flowing it moves me
Login to Reply
Date: 12/8/2010 9:05:00 AM
Hi Joanna Eden has a multifaceted concept that leads one divine process. Well crafted with a pulse that beats across the page. We are made in his likeness and the earth was made in the reflection of heavens glory. Mankind was created to be the caretakers of the land and the earthen vessels we possess. We have been given endless chances to seed,grow and encourage both soil. Yet all worsens. Your insight into the new creation is very paralleled. Excellent read my friend Love Cookie
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2010 4:03:00 AM
No explanation needed here- beautiful poem
Login to Reply
Date: 3/13/2010 7:12:00 AM
very good, constuction flows with the emotion keep writting,,,, Johnathon :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/10/2010 4:14:00 PM
I like this one, very good imagination. I bet u had fun writting this one...
Login to Reply
Date: 3/3/2010 6:15:00 PM
I love this one, It reminds me of the ones i write, very good. keep these ones coming
Login to Reply
Date: 3/3/2010 2:52:00 PM
Interesting topic and theory that you have written and described in this write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter