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Echo In My Dream

The voice that returns my scream strangely haunts me Among the tall pines that stand straight guarding the mountains I see It now sounds somehow familiar as I listen to it shatter the silence of the morning As the echo brings my scream back to find me before the sun has finished rising Beauty draws me deeper into an unknown vastness alone Realizing now I no longer know which way is home I frantically cry out hello can any body hear me, hear me, hear me My cry playing back to me with an eerie melody Confused and scared I sit upon a rock and submit to my fate Observing here all things live in harmony finding no reason one another to hate Somewhat peaceful and quiet now consumed by the magic of this place The leaves dance and whirl across the forest floor as if each other to race As my mind separates that which is real from the image in my dream My ears fill once more with the sound of that terrible haunting scream With sweat on my brow and my heart pounding with every beat The echo reaches that place where dreams and reality meet Upon awakening I find myself safely at home The echo in my dream having claimed forever this night alone ©Donna Jones

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Date: 10/13/2013 1:16:00 AM
Hello Donna,... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=
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Date: 3/21/2013 5:18:00 PM
Dear Donna, YOU captivate me with YOUR POETRY about the Mountains, the Forest floor, and the twirling leaves I long to get back to my Mountain Cabin. Superb Pen. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/21/2013 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Harry...I hope you get to your cabin soon...
Date: 1/30/2013 9:12:00 AM
Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.
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Date: 1/30/2013 6:01:00 PM
Thanks for the nice words of encouragement. I would be honored to read a poem of your friend.
Date: 1/29/2013 7:04:00 AM
I like this Donna, lovely poem! - Have a pleasant day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Jones
Date: 1/29/2013 1:38:00 PM
Hey, thanks...means a lot coming from a wonderful writer as yourself... great day to ya
Date: 1/27/2013 4:30:00 PM
Don't know why but in the last couple of weeks, I have been dreaming every night and they're usually not happy dreams. When I first wake I find it hard to believe they're not real! S-c-a-r-y! Your writing is brilliant dear Donna! Love and hugs, Jack xox
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Donna Jones
Date: 1/27/2013 9:51:00 PM
Well I've been called a lot of things but brilliant isn't one of them haha... and hope you have sweet dreams from now on.....
Date: 1/25/2013 10:39:00 PM
That was some dream ,,,,,, nice write though , have a great day ;}
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Date: 1/27/2013 9:53:00 PM
Yeah!and thanks, dreams can be so strange and real sometimes. You take care and long and happy times dear
Date: 1/23/2013 3:51:00 PM
Dreams can seem so real. I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love
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Donna Jones
Date: 1/25/2013 9:23:00 PM
Yes sometimes too real and sometimes better than real life. Thanks for taking the time to write to me. I appreciate it very much. Blessings always.

Book: Shattered Sighs