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Earths Beautiful Flow


translucent waters
in meandering journey
ancient paths taken

naturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:01:00 PM

James, WOW... talk about beauty in the first degree... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

Date: 2/21/2011 2:22:00 PM

So much to reflect on in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Well done! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/7/2011 8:51:00 AM

Beautiful haiku James, really love the ancient paths taken.....

Deb Radke

Date: 12/16/2010 11:01:00 AM

I get the feeling you may be what some call an 'old soul'. At least, that's the feel I have been getting from some of your poetry. This is wonderful. Visual and well-written. ps. soup mail to you re thank you

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/16/2010 9:24:00 AM

A superbly crafted haiku you have penned here James. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read mine and your always nice comments are deeply appreciated! Hope you have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 4:36:00 AM

James, another beauty from you and so profound too.. Guess who is on holiday?? Hope your Thursday is a good one ;)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/15/2010 11:05:00 AM

Hello James, Such a mellow and beautiful read....Love it As Always, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 6:27:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup James. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/14/2010 11:34:00 PM

this is beautiful James-- I really like how you connect this to the past-- :) -- nikko :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2010 7:42:00 PM

All the way down to those beautiful Loch's, James, love this such profoundness. Harry

Autumn Page

Date: 12/14/2010 7:39:00 PM

i really like this! earth is a beautiful place to be, and provides new beauty to witness everyday! i am so very thankful! thanks for providing great poetry to read today! nice work.

James Peranteau

Date: 12/14/2010 5:11:00 PM

Yesssss; this is definately good dear Sir ! Great write Mr. Fraser ! You are the poet for sure ! And I am sorry if I have offended you in any way. much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2010 4:05:00 PM

Good one..Ancient paths taken..Excellent work..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/14/2010 3:55:00 PM

lovely haiku, so peaceful, good luck in the contest James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2010 3:09:00 PM

The streams and rivers have been meandering in these ancient paths for many years, James. Such a vivid and thought-provoking image that recollects the passage of time. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn