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Dying To Kiss You

You make me want a chocolate cake. Why don't you answer the phone? Maybe our friendship is just fake. Too often I'm sitting at home alone. Why don't you call me or give me a hug? I'm scared of how much I miss you. I'm addicted to you like to a drug. Although, I'm not in love with you, I'm dying to kiss you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/4/2010 5:04:00 AM
Mixed emotions eminate from your words Zuanna, answers that only you will know >> James
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Date: 6/3/2010 2:28:00 PM
Very good, sensual and very romantic !
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:07:00 AM
Wow, thank you, I'm really surprised with your comments, I thought, you'll say it sucks ;) Yes, this is based on my real life, so do all my poems. And they all are 100% true. It may be intriguing, because my feelings are very complicated and this is the weirdest friendship I've ever heard of ;)
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Zuzanna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:36:00 PM
This is sad... Is this based on your real life?
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Date: 5/25/2010 3:18:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family... with luv.."Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 2:30:00 PM
I'm polish, I'm just learning english and this is my very first poem in english, so please, don't kill me ;)
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