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Dying Rose

Vanishing beauty
Your charms rest in memory
Altars chant her name

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/10/2013 6:13:00 AM

Nice haiku James.

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 9:05:00 AM

Congratulations James on a well deserved win!

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/4/2012 8:57:00 AM

It's a wonderful sacrifice penned with golden pen. Loved always, bl

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/18/2012 12:45:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL job of writing on this haiku, Jimbo...not surprised it's a winner...have a fine day my friend! - Tim

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/16/2012 5:05:00 PM

Beautiful and touching, James...congrats to you! Love and Blessings :))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:22:00 PM

James, Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2012 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest James.

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/13/2012 7:29:00 PM

this is so touching James, well done. Congratulations on your win, however I suspect this poem is more than a contest. Take care Lee

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/13/2012 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on a winnning haiku.

David Williams

Date: 8/13/2012 2:26:00 AM

Jimbo, congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/13/2012 1:21:00 AM

James, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD

Fabiyas M V

Date: 8/2/2012 12:03:00 AM

You made it a powerful symbol,James.Thanks for congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2012 8:08:00 PM

Lovely, James. And I take it as symbolic.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2012 7:21:00 AM

Soup mail...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/20/2012 1:00:00 PM

Beautiful and deep haiku James - oxox love Anne-Lise

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/19/2012 3:11:00 PM

Short but so deep, erupts into many visions for my mind to ponder. Thanks for commenting on Depression

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2012 12:14:00 PM

..and her lingering presence stirs.. such soulful write, james... goood job!..:) huggs!

Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/16/2012 9:32:00 AM

i enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing, Jancarl

James Peranteau

Date: 7/16/2012 7:18:00 AM

This Haiku dear poet, is so uplifting ! A caption in bronze beneath an oil painting is the vision which fills my thoughts as I read this wonderful write of yours James ! Have a wonderful week sir....much love, james

Tammy Flanagan

Date: 7/15/2012 10:53:00 PM

Love this, simply beautiful.~Tammy~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2012 2:40:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Not sure your intended interpertation..I feel that it is deeper than seems..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/15/2012 9:04:00 AM

But the scent remains Jim; love this image you give to me! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/14/2012 1:53:00 PM

lovely words and imagery James givinng this flower persona .. hope u r doing well luv.. we are all wonderful..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2012 6:44:00 AM

Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Jimbo. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol