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Dwindling Hope

Hope Dwindles Changing course Of time and space With glacial winds suffocating my whole And absence of color within the snow With the harshness Of yearning Dwindles Hope.

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Sammy Shaq

Date: 4/26/2009 7:26:00 PM

Hope that dwindles, it is common in the heart of the hurt. Love the style. Love, Sami.

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/19/2009 12:15:00 AM

this is reall impressive, yara. another great techincal poem

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/17/2009 5:43:00 PM

Wow. Excellent write. A serious feeling of hopelessness. You did wonders with this form. Love, Shar

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/7/2009 5:30:00 AM

'...absence of color within the snow' so aptly describes the condition of hopelessness and the starkness it brings. Well done Yara! Best wishes, Keith

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/31/2009 5:10:00 AM

I look at the world often times and see what you feel, but I rage to keep my being separate from it. This write reminds me that we poets are everyman, and everything is us. Our words are pictures changed to feelings, and represent the acme of the truth we are. Love and blessings, good write.