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Dust Storm

parched barren earth thirsts unforgiving winds assault the destitute land TLH © 07-09-2012
Haiku or Senryu?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/24/2012 7:09:00 AM
Evocative work here! You stuck to the 5 7 5 scheme which is all to the good. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:12:00 PM
I love a good haiku...this is a nice one...Caleb
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:50:00 PM
Very nicely written.
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Date: 7/10/2012 9:08:00 PM
Very nice one, Tanya. I really liked the assonance of earth and thirsts together!
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Date: 7/10/2012 7:01:00 PM
nice imagery in this haiku Tanya...thanks for sharing...hugs...Joseph
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Date: 7/10/2012 4:35:00 PM
Tanya... wow.. reminds me of a movie called Hidalgo... most enjoyed... pd
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Date: 7/10/2012 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful!!!A haiku I am sure!!!
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Date: 7/10/2012 3:20:00 PM
Wow, this Haiku really enveloped me! I really enjoyed your incredible descriptions of a barren destitute land, so well put! Great Work!!
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