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Below is the poem entitled dusk which was written by poet Lorraine Ferns. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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dusk has closed the day

into night, with lowered lids

the moon a flashlight

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:34:00 PM
    love the light the moon gives.... guides... Lorraine, I love your poem, its a great tribute to all moon lovers... SKAT

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:39:00 PM
    a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Nice Haiku, you have set the scene so well, such great imagery and mood.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 7:32:00 AM
    Very serene. I love dusk only 2nd to the start of a sunrise. Wonderful setting!