Drowning In Love Part 2

she got safe and very fast,
he slept out in the boat because he wanted the night to last,
unfortunatley he didnt know the boat had a leak,
by the time as sunrise he died and lies at the bottom of the creek,
at 7am she woke up and ate breakfast then rode her bike by his house,
she knocked on the door, no one answer it was so quite she could hear a mouse,
she went back to the river but as she arrived she noticed there was a big crowd,
and the whole town was there but it was his mother crying out loud,
she dropped her bike and ran with a ball of speed,
asked his mother whats the matter? " she said my heart bleeds"
so she pause and look to the left and placed her hands on her head,
there he was her lover lying on the ground dead,
she ran to him hugging him crying "saying baby dont do this please talk to me",
get up come on stop it this is not funny,
friends gathered around to move her when the y saw the undertaker,
when he tried to cover his body she broke away and layed on top of him they 
needed her to move but they couldnt make her,
they held her face down it began to rain,
she wiggled but couldnt break free so she watched him got carryed away in great 
pain,
everyone soon after left but she stayed until night crying,
she said i feel very much alive but i also feel like dying,
she saw the very same boat up on the grass wiped her eyes and began to blink,
she went in it knowing it would sink,
she knew she had to die to see him again so she didnt hesitate,
as the boat sank she closed her eyes and kept her faith,
before she reached the bottom she felt her spirit left her body,
she felt this hand lifting her up to the dock and there he was......it was bobby,
he was holding her and calling her name in a loud voice like he was screaming it,
then she woke up in the fields next to him calling her name he said its ok i'm her she 
cried and began to smile she realized it was fake..................she was just dreaming 
it............................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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