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Drowning Beneath The Surface

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Drowning Beneath The Surface

Fallen from the depths of my own despair
Caught in the current of destruction
My path has caught me
I have destroyed what lays ahead
The ocean has drowned me in a deep blackened sorrow
Trapped beneath the surface
Giving up is my only choice
I no longer have the breath in my own voice
Lost in a world where the lights have faded away
Letting go rather I never wished to stay
Stepping on the rocks that dig into thy feet
Where the world within me falls asleep

Sarah M. Williams©2013

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  1. Date: 7/12/2013 11:02:00 AM
    A very strong depiction here. Ominous & powerful.