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Drown to Rise feat Michael J Falotico

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Drown to Rise feat Michael J Falotico

These are thundering noises that I hear
They are thumping in my ears, pump restlessness to my head
I feel like I'm going to explode
Breathe no more.. I gasp my last air 

They're getting louder
I run so fast till I can't feel my feet
I run so fast till I care no more but sounds of my steps
I’m still not breathing

So this is how I die
Drowned by my fear and worries

With my chin just over the point where I could breathe..

I French kiss the air to show my fight and belief…

I won’t leave this cruel world like this, not this way..

My life needs to be read and my dreams another day…

My crawl becomes a walk and my stride now a run..

Because this heart is strong and my soul is not done…

Collaboration feat Michael J. Falotico

Special thanks to Michael J. Falotico that has completed this poem in a perfect way :)

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Awesome collab with an awesome guy:-) It can`t fail when two such great writers put their heads together.Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:28:00 PM
    Very good collaberation.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:34:00 PM
    what a lovely poem ...congratulation for both of you this is so amazing,,, :) enjoyed so much <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:01:00 PM
    It was such a wonderful pleasure to write and create with you Dinda. Your a talent and a sweet friend. xoxo Michael

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:07:00 PM
    A very lovey and wonderful poem, Michael did a wonderful job on the remainder of your poem. a good posting..pd

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:42:00 AM
    - You + Michael ..... (a good mix) it must be a wonderful poem. - BRAVO!!!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:40:00 AM
    Dinda and Michael an excellent collab, love both parts...David