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Dropped In To Say Hello

Its sad to see someone you know and love in a hospital bed, Its sad to see them hanging on to there life by a thread. You begin to wonder, someday that's going to be me laying here, But than you noticed that you loved through so much you'll go away without fear. Seeing an old man on his death bed is a sore sight, Praying and wishing he comes out alive and ready to fight. You begin counting down your own days to live, Thinking about if there is anything else you would like to give. I been dying for a while now and still in counting of my short days, I know I can drop at any moment, but it only seems like I lived in a hais. Who's going to remember me when im gone, People will being saying look at what he has done, A monster in discise I will leave this retched planet, My body barried seven feet deep not six like everyone has done it. To be further away from everyone they will burry me this deep, Everyone will be free from this monsterish evil creep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/18/2012 10:59:00 PM
Roman, a very fine poem, and yes it is hard to see a love one in a hospital bed. I like the way you will exit out of this planet. do see and get away from all the bad seeds... thank you for stopping by and saying hi! Your vision on fighting and judgment is very strong... a wonderful poem to enjoy, have a great one~PD
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Roman Chebukin
Date: 5/21/2012 2:55:00 AM
thank you my dear. it was strait from the heart.
Date: 5/18/2012 5:23:00 AM
Roman is it too hard?..David
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Roman Chebukin
Date: 5/18/2012 5:26:00 AM
You have no idea. I wouldn't want anyone to step into my shoes even for a second.
Date: 5/18/2012 4:58:00 AM
A poem of reflection Roman, very well written. - CHARITY ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:18:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Was written from the heart.

Book: Shattered Sighs