Drink

I do not have the drink
Drink itself has me!
Controls me when I am  out of control
Reduces my stresses
It helps to forget you

I salute alcohol
And a million thanks to its inventor
Neither wine harmful nor me
Evil is your world
What is the purpose of life?
Work, husband, and stress!

Everyone treats me as a waiter
I was always ordered
Money has purchased my love,
The world of my care

He accepts me as I am
share my woe
He is in my blood
We can not live separately

I am in love with alcohol
And I respect its inventor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/27/2013 5:27:00 PM
well, I hope this one is all in fun. Dont' want you to be an alcoholic! I like your zest for life as portrayed in your love for wine here.
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Date: 9/8/2013 7:04:00 AM
It's a very funny world. I liked this work a lot. We are all in debt to alcohol. It does have a very pleasing effect for those of us who can use it in moderation. What is life for? That is a decision each of us has to make. But I hope you will continue to write.
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Date: 9/7/2013 3:39:00 PM
Hi Litan, wow! praising the inventor. much to ponder on. I wish to take control of what controls me. we can accept the way we are... well done. I have to read another from you.. :-) always ~Linda
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Date: 9/7/2013 10:08:00 PM
Yea you are right and thank you so much for your continuous appreciation and love to my works.........Have a lovely sunday.
Date: 9/7/2013 7:59:00 AM
- Live your life with joy my friend, Litan .... A well written poem! - I still breathe .... I am not 100 !! - Thank you for visiting my poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2013 11:09:00 AM
.... submitted in response to S-mail (in inbox) - Anne-Lise :)
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Litan Dey
Date: 9/7/2013 8:37:00 AM
I hope you have more breathe to give air to poetrysoup and its members.Thank you............
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