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'drifting'



just like a feather, I am
I float in the air, so sublime
sometimes, I fall to the ground
but mostly, I am drifting in time
wondering, who I am and why I am

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November 25, 2012


Poetry/Verse/'drifting'
Copyright Protected, ID 11-438-305-25
All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/25/2013 2:05:00 PM

I like this, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2013 11:21:00 AM

A....M...A...Z...I...N...G!!! Congrats on the win Constance.

John Posey

Date: 6/25/2013 10:21:00 AM

You are a pleasant mystery waiting to be solved... Great win and well deserved.... Jake

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/25/2013 6:54:00 AM

Constance I certainly can relate to this poem. A wonderful piece. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2013 11:31:00 PM

it really has a "drifting" quality to it too, Constance. NICE win!! Congrats.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/3/2012 9:10:00 AM

a sublime write as the feather hypnotizes to entrance Constance .. quaint and lovely premise dear heart friend .. I like that u went back to 'dear heart' recognition luv..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/26/2012 10:47:00 AM

I like this surreal floating feeling.

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2012 5:15:00 AM

Constance I like this soft and dreamy verse..David

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/25/2012 12:58:00 PM

I too finding myself wondering the same things at times, it's just natural to do so I believe! What a beautiful verse my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and delightful poem this afternoon! You have written an outstanding piece, Great Work!!