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just like a feather, I am
I float in the air, so sublime
sometimes, I fall to the ground
but mostly, I am drifting in time
wondering, who I am and why I am


November 25, 2012

Submitted to the contest, One Of Your Favz, Old Poem

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  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:05:00 PM
    I like this, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:21:00 AM
    A....M...A...Z...I...N...G!!! Congrats on the win Constance.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:21:00 AM
    You are a pleasant mystery waiting to be solved... Great win and well deserved.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:54:00 AM
    Constance I certainly can relate to this poem. A wonderful piece. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 11:31:00 PM
    it really has a "drifting" quality to it too, Constance. NICE win!! Congrats.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:10:00 AM
    a sublime write as the feather hypnotizes to entrance Constance .. quaint and lovely premise dear heart friend .. I like that u went back to 'dear heart' recognition luv..

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:47:00 AM
    I like this surreal floating feeling.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:15:00 AM
    Constance I like this soft and dreamy verse..David

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 12:58:00 PM
    I too finding myself wondering the same things at times, it's just natural to do so I believe! What a beautiful verse my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and delightful poem this afternoon! You have written an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:25:00 AM
    enjoyed,sometimes I drift like that,great write Dear Heart

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:24:00 AM
    Love this one, Constance. It's the definition of short and sweet, which happen to be my favorite type of poem!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:19:00 AM
    Lovely verse!!! WOW... I keep reading it over and over... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:01:00 AM
    I guess we all feel that way from time to time - beautifully worded indeed