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'drifting'

just like a feather, I am I float in the air, so sublime sometimes, I fall to the ground but mostly, I am drifting in time wondering, who I am and why I am _____________________ November 25, 2012 Poetry/Verse/'drifting' Copyright Protected, ID 11-438-305-25 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Date: 6/25/2013 2:05:00 PM
I like this, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:21:00 AM
A....M...A...Z...I...N...G!!! Congrats on the win Constance.
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:21:00 AM
You are a pleasant mystery waiting to be solved... Great win and well deserved.... Jake
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:54:00 AM
Constance I certainly can relate to this poem. A wonderful piece. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/24/2013 11:31:00 PM
it really has a "drifting" quality to it too, Constance. NICE win!! Congrats.
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Date: 12/3/2012 9:10:00 AM
a sublime write as the feather hypnotizes to entrance Constance .. quaint and lovely premise dear heart friend .. I like that u went back to 'dear heart' recognition luv..
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Date: 11/26/2012 10:47:00 AM
I like this surreal floating feeling.
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Date: 11/26/2012 5:15:00 AM
Constance I like this soft and dreamy verse..David
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Date: 11/25/2012 12:58:00 PM
I too finding myself wondering the same things at times, it's just natural to do so I believe! What a beautiful verse my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and delightful poem this afternoon! You have written an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/25/2012 9:25:00 AM
enjoyed,sometimes I drift like that,great write Dear Heart
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Date: 11/25/2012 8:24:00 AM
Love this one, Constance. It's the definition of short and sweet, which happen to be my favorite type of poem!
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Date: 11/25/2012 7:19:00 AM
Lovely verse!!! WOW... I keep reading it over and over... hugs Michael
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Date: 11/25/2012 7:01:00 AM
I guess we all feel that way from time to time - beautifully worded indeed
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