Dreamtime: Distant View

moonlight 
 wakens 
 ancient yearnings 
 in 
 my 
 soul 

 setting free my spirit 
 to 
 challenge 
 destiny 

 dreaming 
 arc's of infinity 

 fueled by the light 
 coursing the sky 

 searching  
 the 
 glimmer 
 that bends time 
 and 
 whispers 
 what lies
 behind, ahead 
 or 
 inspires 
 bursting atoms 

 shaping 
 strings of life 


 .....shifting 
 my 
 evolution

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/28/2022 3:46:00 AM
Good works keep it up.
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Date: 3/14/2022 7:11:00 PM
"shaping strings of life" - Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:50:00 AM
You should really Publish a Dreamtime Series of Poetry.Very Good in It:) These are all Goin' to My Favourites!
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Date: 6/11/2009 9:02:00 AM
Love This Style. Peace. Boo
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Date: 4/9/2009 6:32:00 AM
This poem speaks volumes I love the style. Very talented individual. You mentioned enjoying my Poem Shadows. Here are two you might find interesting when you have a few minutes to read. (Darkness) (Night Flight)
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Date: 3/31/2009 3:05:00 AM
I love the format ..Cant figure how to post mine in the middle Thanks for your comment on my poetry I like the last stanza...Cheryl
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Date: 3/30/2009 7:27:00 AM
Cool write James.... thanks for your recent comment
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Date: 3/23/2009 9:00:00 PM
Well done...I like the format myself. It approaches in unsure stages just like a dream does. The clarity is residual and only complete in it's finality...just like a dream Right on, Write on!! Steve
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Date: 3/22/2009 2:57:00 PM
Nice, very nice, yet the format is distracting. Light & Love
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Date: 3/17/2009 7:03:00 PM
Dear Jim, YOUR POEMS are so Unique both in body and text and Design One flows like a river from the Start to the End ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/17/2009 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful words, I especially love the part that reads "inspires bursting atoms" that is true poetry. Excellent write!~Thank you for your kind words on my poem "Child or Adult" it is a tragic story and so true, your words of support give me hope that someone will hear my sons plea. ~Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/17/2009 11:03:00 AM
Your poetry just flows... like a river...that never ends.. it is very spiritual and may I say dreamy... Constance
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:34:00 AM
This is another of your wonderful writes James. I am so happy to be reading your work because you are a talented one.. Thanks for the awesome comments.
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Date: 3/15/2009 5:28:00 PM
LOUD SCREAMSSSS so the words, the message and the artistic flair you've shown are so exciting. GREAT
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Date: 3/15/2009 3:08:00 PM
This is deeply rooted, and makes me think of Native American spiritual connections of the spirit and nature, together. Nicely done! (Thank you for your comment on my 'Country Road" poem...Peafowl...namely peacocks and peahens, run wild at times around this area...)...Thanks for asking!,,Carrie
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