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Dreamtime: Distant View

moonlight wakens ancient yearnings in my soul setting free my spirit to challenge destiny dreaming arc's of infinity fueled by the light coursing the sky searching the glimmer that bends time and whispers what lies behind, ahead or inspires bursting atoms shaping strings of life .....shifting my evolution

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Michaela Renee Solomon

Date: 5/28/2022 3:46:00 AM

Good works keep it up.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/14/2022 7:11:00 PM

"shaping strings of life" - Great writing. Congratulations!

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/13/2009 4:50:00 AM

You should really Publish a Dreamtime Series of Poetry.Very Good in It:) These are all Goin' to My Favourites!

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/11/2009 9:02:00 AM

Love This Style. Peace. Boo

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/9/2009 6:32:00 AM

This poem speaks volumes I love the style. Very talented individual. You mentioned enjoying my Poem Shadows. Here are two you might find interesting when you have a few minutes to read. (Darkness) (Night Flight)

Cheryl Mccall

Date: 3/31/2009 3:05:00 AM

I love the format ..Cant figure how to post mine in the middle Thanks for your comment on my poetry I like the last stanza...Cheryl

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 3/30/2009 7:27:00 AM

Cool write James.... thanks for your recent comment

Steve Voorhees

Date: 3/23/2009 9:00:00 PM

Well done...I like the format myself. It approaches in unsure stages just like a dream does. The clarity is residual and only complete in it's finality...just like a dream Right on, Write on!! Steve

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/22/2009 2:57:00 PM

Nice, very nice, yet the format is distracting. Light & Love

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/17/2009 7:03:00 PM

Dear Jim, YOUR POEMS are so Unique both in body and text and Design One flows like a river from the Start to the End ALWAYS...HG

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/17/2009 11:38:00 AM

Beautiful words, I especially love the part that reads "inspires bursting atoms" that is true poetry. Excellent write!~Thank you for your kind words on my poem "Child or Adult" it is a tragic story and so true, your words of support give me hope that someone will hear my sons plea. ~Smiles from Lolita

Constance La France

Date: 3/17/2009 11:03:00 AM

Your poetry just flows... like a river...that never ends.. it is very spiritual and may I say dreamy... Constance

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/16/2009 5:34:00 AM

This is another of your wonderful writes James. I am so happy to be reading your work because you are a talented one.. Thanks for the awesome comments.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/15/2009 5:28:00 PM

LOUD SCREAMSSSS so the words, the message and the artistic flair you've shown are so exciting. GREAT

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2009 3:08:00 PM

This is deeply rooted, and makes me think of Native American spiritual connections of the spirit and nature, together. Nicely done! (Thank you for your comment on my 'Country Road" poem...Peafowl...namely peacocks and peahens, run wild at times around this area...)...Thanks for asking!,,Carrie