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Dreams Wish For More

A shared romance in haunting dance vision. Two souls dance inside dream-worlds prism. Outside the dream that grows the heart. A tale of deep sorrow keeps them apart. Rainbow sparkles on dream-prism’s glass True loves token inside dreams do last Outside the dream the dance is for one Stumbling feet finding no place for fun Joyful laughter is heard with toes tapping Gone are the tethers of grief overlapping Outside the dream in bitter-sweet steeping Remembering the dance in realities keeping Inside the dream reality doesn’t score Outside the dream dreamers wish for more

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Robert Johnson

Date: 11/26/2014 12:07:00 PM

Hello Debra, Just stopping by to wish you a joy filled Thanksgiving. May your dreams become reality. Peace. Your friend Bob. :) P.S. As long as they're not nightmares. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2013 9:53:00 AM

Debra, a nice little winning poem in Michael's dreaming into the bay contest... xox~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/2/2013 6:32:00 PM

Very true verse here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2013 3:00:00 PM

Lovely poem,Debra, and long time no see. Big congrats for your win. It was nice to see you again thru seeing the winners list here.

Bonchance Longfall

Date: 5/26/2013 8:48:00 AM

Loved this write. It flows so smoothly like a happy brook down hill. Dreams are a wonderful thing to write about and you did it well. Outsie the dream in bitter-sweet steeping, remembering the dance in realities keeping. A wonderful couplet!

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/15/2013 5:10:00 PM

A dreamers dream go's on forever. While poets and thinkers try to be clever. A dream for two is meant to be. Just go to sleep and you'll surely see. Tomorrow's dawn will bring what may. But for tonight your love will stay. :)

Deb Wilson

Date: 5/14/2013 10:34:00 PM

dreams and dancing how very lovely and a very alluring and interesting poem Debra..great! love,Deb

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/14/2013 7:29:00 PM

Wow, you are back now with a vengeance my friend! You have surfaced with an ultimate power of rhythm and rhyme, a beautiful sophistication that which I enjoy immensely! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and awesome poem this evening! What a delightful piece, such a tremendous poem Debra! Great Work!!