Dreams Wish For More

A shared romance in haunting dance vision. 
Two souls dance inside dream-worlds prism. 

      Outside the dream that grows the heart. 
      A tale of deep sorrow keeps them apart.

Rainbow sparkles on dream-prism’s glass
True loves token inside dreams do last

      Outside the dream the dance is for one
      Stumbling feet finding no place for fun

Joyful laughter is heard with toes tapping
Gone are the tethers of grief overlapping

      Outside the dream in bitter-sweet steeping
      Remembering the dance in realities keeping

Inside the dream reality doesn’t score
Outside the dream dreamers wish for more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/26/2014 12:07:00 PM
Hello Debra, Just stopping by to wish you a joy filled Thanksgiving. May your dreams become reality. Peace. Your friend Bob. :) P.S. As long as they're not nightmares. :)
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:53:00 AM
Debra, a nice little winning poem in Michael's dreaming into the bay contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/2/2013 6:32:00 PM
Very true verse here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/2/2013 3:00:00 PM
Lovely poem,Debra, and long time no see. Big congrats for your win. It was nice to see you again thru seeing the winners list here.
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Date: 5/26/2013 8:48:00 AM
Loved this write. It flows so smoothly like a happy brook down hill. Dreams are a wonderful thing to write about and you did it well. Outsie the dream in bitter-sweet steeping, remembering the dance in realities keeping. A wonderful couplet!
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Date: 5/15/2013 5:10:00 PM
A dreamers dream go's on forever. While poets and thinkers try to be clever. A dream for two is meant to be. Just go to sleep and you'll surely see. Tomorrow's dawn will bring what may. But for tonight your love will stay. :)
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Date: 5/14/2013 10:34:00 PM
dreams and dancing how very lovely and a very alluring and interesting poem Debra..great! love,Deb
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Date: 5/14/2013 7:29:00 PM
Wow, you are back now with a vengeance my friend! You have surfaced with an ultimate power of rhythm and rhyme, a beautiful sophistication that which I enjoy immensely! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and awesome poem this evening! What a delightful piece, such a tremendous poem Debra! Great Work!!
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