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Dreams Of Forever

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Dreams Of Forever

Come and take my hand
Hold me close and don't let go
Forever entwined

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  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:11:00 AM
    A very intense dream Shannon, I love the feeling of holding of forever. Entwined in a dream, how romantic' Siddy (soup mail)

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 9:25:00 AM
    love your poems shannon

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 10:05:00 AM
    * “Your Lovely Treasures Inspired Myself This Early Morn * I Hope That You Do Not Mind, Yet * Beauty Is Beauty * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * As For Your Beauties Lovely Poetry Here * Tis But A Dream That One Dreams * When Finding A Jewel Which Shines Sooo Bright * I Am Going to Love Your Splendours Verse * I Can Feel It * Deep Inside * My Luv, Always, Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 6:25:00 PM
    * “Ow * I Have Afore Been Here * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * It Must Have Been The Title * Luv * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 6:26:00 PM
    never unwind unplanned, never mind how dry, the sand:) confused me too...

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 5:43:00 PM
    * “Ow * This Is Beautiful Shannon * But Not As Beautiful As Finding Your Loveliness Amid My Com Box * Sooo Very Sweet * And Yesss, A Soft, Warm & Lovely Hand to Hold * Causes My Heart to Skip A Beat * Beautiful Shannon * Luv * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 2:53:00 AM
    Very nice, Shannon. Congratulations on your success! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 9:09:00 PM
    Congrats on your win...well done. BG

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 3:22:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Shannon in Francine's contest. Alexa

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 2:54:00 PM
    An awesome dream to have Shannon.. Congratulations on your win in the contest ;)

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 1:32:00 PM
    Congrats Shannon on your HM in the contest with this sultry sensuous senryu luv.. perfect words ...enjoy special honor..

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 12:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Shannon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 11:56:00 AM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Shannon

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:27:00 AM
    great job with this win. cory

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:24:00 AM
    Congratulations Shannon on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:09:00 AM
    congrats on your HM in the contest with this romantic piece

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 6:37:00 AM
    this was great!! cory

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 6:20:00 PM
    Lovely sensuous write, Shannon