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Dreams of Flying - Flown Away

Into the air I used to lift, and with the clouds or stars I’d drift. . . another place, another day. My flying dreams have flown away. No longer do I sail to sky at night when in my bed I lie. My feet, once wings, have turned to clay and dreams of flying flown away. Now sweet night visions in my head grow fewer. More I dream instead I’m lost or late. To my dismay, the flying dreams have flown away. Oh, where has gone nocturnal bliss, and how have plans gone so amiss that now I find my world turned gray and dreams of flying flown away? I long to run, leave ground and then glide up. . . Why can’t I soar again? I’m tied to earth and brought to bay now flying dreams have flown away. And fleeting time has also flown, so now I only can bemoan a fantasy I can’t replay in dreams of flying. . . flown away. For 'The Poet's Ache' Poetry Contest of Greg Barden

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Date: 8/11/2017 9:18:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I love this poetry form Kyrielle and I love your poem. So eloquent and beautifully worded. I too, miss my dreams of flying, but when I have one (rarely now) I cherish the memory of my flight. Maybe, my feet will have wings tonight... Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/11/2017 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my friend. I knew this jewel would place very well.
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Date: 8/11/2017 10:50:00 AM
Very lyrical poem Andrea congrats on another winning poem!
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Date: 8/11/2017 5:49:00 AM
A beautiful kyrielle and wise choice of words and a well deserved win. I enjoyed it Andrea. :) Hugs Sunita
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Date: 8/11/2017 3:59:00 AM
I adore this, Andrea, and so relate ... I always had flying dreams as a child and in my youth, and the older I get, the fewer I have ... it's sad, really, cuz I loved them! Wonderful write - congratulations on FOURTH PLACE!! :-) <3
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Date: 3/29/2014 10:53:00 AM
Nice flow to this poem Andrea. Seems dreams of flying are common. I have never flown in my dreams except in an airplane. Funny that if it is so common that I have never done it.lol love phyl
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Date: 3/14/2014 6:28:00 PM
I love the rhythm and longing in this poem, very dreamy, Andrea!
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:00:00 AM
I like this. flows easily and smoothly, reflects nicely on how dreams fade and youth's wings fly away
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Date: 2/3/2014 4:40:00 PM
Andrea it flows very well...David
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Date: 2/2/2014 7:01:00 AM
so wonderful to be taken away with the flow of this beautiful rendering
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Date: 2/2/2014 6:14:00 AM
so this is a kyrielle. well it sure does fly my dreams away. :-) late flight congratulations from moi.
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Date: 1/31/2014 10:13:00 AM
I'm so sorry. Better times are coming though - a bluebird on the wing. LOve, daver
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Date: 1/31/2014 7:08:00 AM
I know the feeling that your dreams have sprouted wings and flown off without you. But other dreams come, sometimes softly riding a leaf in the breeze. You can't be tethered to the ground. Your poetry will always lift you and us.
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Date: 1/29/2014 11:41:00 PM
A little sad, but very thoughtful. Perfect form for this verse, I think, and beautifully written too. I can't help but laugh at your polar bear poem since I have been in the same boat. I must say your duck poem was very natural; that is one of the things I look for.
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Date: 1/29/2014 5:03:00 PM
into a world of imaginings, you fly high, andie.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2014 8:36:00 AM
So good to see this one on the winners list, congratulations.
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Date: 1/29/2014 2:17:00 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea! Takes us back to our childhood dreams where everything was possible and flying was not unusual. I guess as we grow older we loose that which made opened our minds to possibilities - we become grounded in reality and forsake our dreams. Very well written!
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:52:00 AM
Time is a non-forgiving entity, my friend. Where once we soared impulsively, we are now grounded, our wings clipped.
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Date: 1/28/2014 2:18:00 AM
Glad to see one of these types of poems presented again. As usual, nicely written.
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Date: 1/27/2014 11:49:00 PM
Wonderful and a reality that comes more and more as we grow older. Loved reading your flowing words.....the dreams almost lifted again as I read. SuZ
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Date: 1/27/2014 11:13:00 PM
A nice Kyrielle..great to read u again..thnx for stopping by!!
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Date: 1/27/2014 11:12:00 PM
A nice Kyrielle..great to read u again..thnx for stopping by!!
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:12:00 AM
Wow, Andrea. This has perfect rhyme and flow. The story captivates me. A very good poem....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/27/2014 7:34:00 AM
A solo trip through the air - nice rhyme scheme. Hope your fantasies com back/ What do you think of my latest poem? Peace & Love Matthew Anish .
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