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Sandcastles made by little ones
they`v been here since noon
children launch is ready..........
was the call that deserted these castles
looking at these beautiful buildings
thoughts starts flowing in.........

When i grow up, i`ll build a mansion
choice cars and choice girls
daddy you i `ll build a factory
mummy, a super-mart of popular demand
oh time, won`t you fly a bit fast
so age could make me old

Grown now am i, with this phrase in mind
oh how time flies, old with age 
and nothing to show forth
don`t dream my dream...vain thinking
dream! do more than dream
plan! do more than plan
pray! do more than pray
work! do more than work
or your may end up saying, it`s daddy`s fault

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  1. Date: 12/8/2010 3:13:00 AM
    Very meaningful write on building the sandcastlebut with lessons to learn, daniel

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 3:06:00 AM
    This makes me sad :( but it's lovely nonetheless. And you are never too old to do something you wanna do. You can still act of your dreams... :) nice work today