Dreaming

I went outside last night in my dream, into the dark cold night, Winter still, surreal and unworldly, the snow falling; I looked up into the fathomless night and snowflakes kissed me, I held them in my hands to feel them melting away. So silent were those perfect snowflakes. My white gauzy gown trailed behind me and raven hair flowed, Scarlet lips lush, a purple amethyst at my throat glistened; Tinkling softly in the silence my horse white as white followed, He stepped high as we traveled deeper and deeper. Snow was falling and falling and falling. The sound of a horse coming closer, yet I had no fear, A man with a face beautiful and dark long hair waited; His emerald eyes blazing and burning, he stepped toward me, Cold lips and scarlet lips mingled as one. _______________________________ August 2, 2013 Poetry/Verse/Dreaming Copyright Protected, ID 08-496-536-02 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France
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Date: 8/13/2013 3:29:00 PM
Wow Constance...I know that you are a horse lover and you have taken that love and turned it into a romantic gem...Congratulations my friend - Tim
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Date: 8/13/2013 9:37:00 AM
congrats on a great win
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:56:00 PM
very sensual poem congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & love dearheart
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Date: 8/11/2013 2:31:00 PM
Broken, love your pen ..... congratulations Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/11/2013 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place xx
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Date: 8/11/2013 8:59:00 AM
A beautiful and engaging poem. Love the flowing elegant theme very much and congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations Broken, Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda
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Date: 8/3/2013 11:33:00 AM
Very lovely poet nicely done
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Date: 8/2/2013 8:47:00 PM
This is a wonderful and delightful write my friend! I really love dream poetry as they can be very creative, just like this one is! What a beautifully written piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/2/2013 10:09:00 AM
this is amazingly beautiful, Constance! a 7! (keep forgetting to do numbers but this one makes me remember to do it)
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