Dreamer

This early morn I woke up my cheek to a wet pillow a hot tear upon my shoulder cold arms on empty sheets It must have been somebody special who came into my sleep It must have been a memory which lingered in a dream It must have been a moment where other moments disappear It must have been his palms playing within my hair. I walked so closely to the window my fingertips kept writing in the mist a name i thought i had forgotten kept coming back in a sweet kiss I've put my arms around me believing he was standing there a warm breath upon my neck's nape Soft whisper in my ear. Last night I have been dreaming this morn kept feeling blue I wonder if in your world you are a dreamer too.
Charma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/26/2013 5:22:00 PM
I find the end of this poem interesting. Very nice conclusion. ~I find your comments amusing, especially the one for the Vikings. I finally came up with some new poems; I hope you enjoy them.
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Date: 3/21/2012 8:17:00 PM
deja-vu! love those moment of longing a memory and you express it beautifully Charma
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Date: 3/18/2012 2:34:00 PM
Wow, all the ingredients for a heart ripper. The dream that brings back so many memories; loved this, tugs at the heart!
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Date: 3/16/2012 6:28:00 PM
(*.*) = Whenever I Think About Your Lovely Beauty, Dear Beautiful Charmaine == It Brings About A Smile Unto My Heart * Such Precious Gentleness & John Was Right, You, Truly Are A Beautiful Cinderella === Love Always, Jasper *
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:57:00 AM
charma, a beautiful and deep way.. one can only be a dreamer until reaching the stars....im sure he's lost to you as well...always pd
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:32:00 AM
What an amazing poem. It sent a chill through my body. You seem to be in touch with the spirits. Thanks for sharing your work with us, Jancarl. THanks for reading my recent work "dark lines"
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Date: 3/16/2012 3:37:00 AM
Amazing poetry from you Charma.To my Favs!
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Date: 3/15/2012 3:57:00 PM
Aww shucks, this really touched me, Charma and I can't help but be able to relate to this so much...your words flow beautifully here and you've captured such sadness here...I am a dreamer too! And I Love your avatar, very pretty and lovely lady :D hugs to you! I hope all is well with you!
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Date: 3/15/2012 11:48:00 AM
You have never lost the soft nature of your poetry. Breathless, I am, as always. :)
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