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dream on

Dream On!

Clouds hang low today covering the ridge,
if I drive up there on my bike I can hide in 
a steel blue cloud and people will say:
where is he? Him! He is trying to find 
the milky way where postmen wear red 
uniforms and say good morning sir before
handing you the gas bill. 
Sigh, here back on earth the post has been 
privatized low status, casual work, they 
wear jeans and anorak and have no time for 
a chat, their route is long and a man with 
a timepiece follows them around.
When coming down from the ridge I will not 
carry tablets, stay silent drive home and 
make a cup of coffee.

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:33:00 PM
    Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Jan. Love, Carol

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 10/1/2012 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Carol
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:12:00 AM
    my postman wore pink drove me to drink always he'd smile and say "bonjour" then he'd leave the mail addressed to next door. love you, Kathy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 10/1/2012 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks kathy, you just made a poem there