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Dream (Part 1 of the Dreaming Series)

Close your eyes, A paradise, That you prefer, Can be inferred, In your sleep, Your mind will reap, The thoughts you sow, Where fantasies grow, Dreams pursue, Where thoughts ensue, Conscious leaves, Sub-conscious breathes, Fairy tales that don't exist, Imagination will persist, But as age dawns, you will learn, That honesty is hardly earned, As much as it is a gift, Given to hosts of tongues so swift, Sleeplessness is a sign of heart, A sign of thoughts of one so smart,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/9/2010 9:14:00 AM
I like it. Good job. Keep it up:)
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Date: 6/27/2010 12:20:00 PM
Especially like the first stanza and the last two lines..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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