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Dream (Part 1 of The Dreaming Series)

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Dream (Part 1 of The Dreaming Series)

Close your eyes,
A paradise,
That you prefer,
Can be inferred,

In your sleep,
Your mind will reap,
The thoughts you sow,
Where fantasies grow,

Dreams pursue,
Where thoughts ensue,
Conscious leaves,
Sub-conscious breathes,

Fairy tales that don't exist,
Imagination will persist,
But as age dawns, you will learn,
That honesty is hardly earned,

As much as it is a gift,
Given to hosts of tongues so swift,
Sleeplessness is a sign of heart,
A sign of thoughts of one so smart,

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  1. Date: 9/9/2010 9:14:00 AM
    I like it. Good job. Keep it up:)

  1. Date: 6/27/2010 12:20:00 PM
    Especially like the first stanza and the last two lines..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara