Drawn By Your Scent

Holding you so close is delightful
Your scent draws me in
                               Leads me to desire you more
                                                 Just to place my soft lips 'pon you 
Dreaming of the delicate thrill
                                      When my lips meet the flavor that I desire
Longing for the time when we can meet in secret
                                                          Soon, oh, very soon this will happen
Just a few more minutes 
                             Then I can slip away to join you in sweet rapsody
                Holding onto the dream of your sweetness
                                                        Coveting any time with you
As I walk to our rendezvous
               Our love hideaway anticipation builds until 
I unwrap your swirling red  luscious, tantalizing Lily Blossom
                     Your aroma surrounds me...

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Softly Sensual

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/20/2013 10:54:00 AM
Very nice poem, I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:13:00 AM
aaaaa......love. This poem can stir the stoniest of hearts.....very well done.
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:01:00 PM
Oh my Sara!...Haven't seen this side of you before! So very glad I did...Congrats - Tim
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Date: 9/2/2013 10:07:00 PM
Beautiful. Many warm congrats for the win.
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Date: 9/2/2013 9:20:00 PM
Sara, ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ Linda
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Date: 9/2/2013 6:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/2/2013 8:30:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Nette Onclauds contest of 9/1/2013. A superb poem -highly expressive. Thanks Sara for visiting my poem My Pen and for your uplifting message of congratulations. -Mohammad
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Date: 9/2/2013 7:57:00 AM
congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 9/2/2013 7:57:00 AM
Beautifuly expressed, congratulations Sara.
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:35:00 PM
Hello Sara, a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 9/1/2013 11:58:00 AM
Well Sara, not quite sure if it's the sent of the flower or the captivating feeling of sensual love that inspired this poem. Either way I love the soft and sensual feel ...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/1/2013 6:48:00 AM
- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Sara! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2013 4:14:00 AM
Wow..This is indeed soft and sensual..Such a beautiful ardent poem..Charma
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:35:00 AM
Nice imaginative and creative poem. "I unwrap your swirling red luscious, tantalizing Lily Blossom" nice symbolism demonstrated in this line
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Date: 8/27/2013 2:44:00 AM
great work.
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Date: 8/26/2013 4:49:00 PM
wonderful, SAra. I just look at that picture and can't even think what to write about!!!
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Date: 8/26/2013 4:29:00 PM
SARA!!!! SARA SARA SARA! :) This is so amazing! I am so impressed, my dear! It is nice to see this side of you...Good luck in the contest with this sweet write! HUGS!
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Date: 8/26/2013 3:34:00 PM
your lines draw me in!
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Date: 8/26/2013 1:19:00 PM
Hi Sara, Lovely romantic write..Good luck in the contest... Ken
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Date: 8/26/2013 12:07:00 PM
My, Oh My.... I've never seen this side of you.... Great entry in the contest.... Sara, I always enjoy my visits to your portfolio.... Love ya dearly..... Jake
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:25:00 AM
love this romantic write, my friend
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Date: 8/26/2013 7:48:00 AM
Wow Sara, you have expressed your sensual side quite amazingly with this write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your incredible poem this morning! Your style is very impressive as well! What a lovely piece, such a grand verse, Great Work!!
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