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Dramatic Moment

   "Dramatic Moment"




hearts carved in oak tree
love engrained on wooden bark

I cried as rain crashed

lover buried beneath leaves
death awaits sweet rendezvous.


*For Suzette Crous's Tanka - The Pivot Contest 

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Skat A Date: 3/13/2014 2:58:00 AM wow... love the imagery... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 10/10/2012 3:12:00 PM wow, such a heartfelt poem, enjoyed this... Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 10/10/2012 10:05:00 AM beautiful and sad write here, my friend - sure to do well in the contest. How are your hands today? I pray for some improvement for you xx Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 10/9/2012 3:39:00 PM There is a silver lining with all of this...the sweet rendezvous...when we finally meet in heaven! We must look upon the positive or we'll go crazy and we'll never be happy again! I really enjoyed your write today as I have read it this evening! I have been busy all day today and have fallen behind in my daily commenting! But I had to read yours, for your poetry has a special flair to it that I really enjoy! Thanks for sharing this clever piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Alicia Lorraine Mathes Date: 10/9/2012 2:28:00 PM Truly Beautiful Linda. ~ Alicia Lorraine Mathes Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/9/2012 9:10:00 AM A touching heartfelt tanka by you Linda.Beautifully penned. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/9/2012 8:39:00 AM thinking of those old romantic novels when happy endings were unfounded poets .. enjoy on this rainy day here in NJ ..luv Login to Reply