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Below is the poem entitled DOWN HILL which was written by poet LUCY KIETI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I turned  and turned,
Where was my help,
Where could i get help from.
Who was to rescue me,
I was going down hill.

I looked and looked,
No one was nearby,
No one heard me scream,
No one on sight,
I was going down hill.

I cried and cried ,
Pain engulfed my throat,
Pain pierced through my heart,
Pain was my companion,
i was going down hill.

Then i looked in the sky,
Knelt down to pray,
I was drained of all my strengh ,
At the bottom of the hill, 
I cried for mercy.

Where was my help,
Dear God ,
Dear God,
Dear God,

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Anne is right. Is time to climb back up that hill and raise your flag high. Welcome to poetry soup. Regards Richard

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Lucy, Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you do not loses courage by the comments you have received. - It's a good poem, and I look forward to reading more from you in the future .... Have fun with words and thoughts - write so that your computer will be hot! - I've been on this page for a while now and I'm just saying "Heia Norge"! - Anne-Lise (Norge) :)