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Don'T Wake Me Up

I swear I'm doing the Unthinkable Something I promise to never do again . , . It's like screaming & nobody can hear you , it's like a drug your addict to . .' Baby Its You . man ; rehab doesn't work , & screening only hurts my throat . So what am i to do when I'm stuck between you & all the hurt ?' Human Instinct is to run , but I don't want to run from you . . . I wanna be with you . . , even saying it is Unrealistic . To me maybe it's all just a dream . ,' So do a Cb & don't wake up me . . Please .

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Date: 5/9/2013 9:33:00 PM
Hi Rainbow, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/5/2013 8:12:00 AM
Rainbow , Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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