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Don'T Look Back

I watch you walk away Counting each step one by one My emotions begin to run wild inside Please don't stop, Don't look back at me Just keep going, My heart can't take it Why must you tease me and leave me Our eyes can't meet a second time For my resistance is not that great I'm dying inside, I can't come with you So if you ever cared for me, Please... Just leave..and Don't look back

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Belinda Parish

Date: 3/28/2009 11:00:00 AM

Excellent write Tyesha. I know the feeling all to well, sometimes you have to walk away.

Misty Hunter

Date: 3/28/2009 7:06:00 AM

you captured that perfectly. I told someone nearly exactly that. no one ever tells you that when you fall in love you sign up to be tortured and torn between the wills of two

John Rhinem

Date: 3/26/2009 12:50:00 PM

Sometimes this seems to the very best way of saying goodbye and then moving on with ones only life! Eliminting perhaps the chains of binding and possibly residue; which holds only empty hope within our own dreams, towards a brigter and better future, towards what our tur hearts long for within our lives!? Excellent write dear Tyesha! Love and warmth always, John!:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/26/2009 7:22:00 AM

I hear the crying out in this piece....heart breaking! ~ love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/26/2009 6:07:00 AM

So hard to be strong. Awesome write. I am feeling you. Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/26/2009 5:28:00 AM

Ty sometimes you have to just fake it for a second or two then ta da its for real. In this poem I think she is gaining strength with every step he takes.

Brian Strand

Date: 3/26/2009 1:28:00 AM

Heart wrenching words Tyesha.Well written poemRgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Anna Roberts

Date: 3/25/2009 10:37:00 PM

i like this. i think everyone has felt like this at some stage.. nicely written :)