Don'T Look Back

I watch you walk away

Counting each step one by one

My emotions begin to run wild inside

Please don't stop, Don't look back at me

Just keep going, My heart can't take it

Why must you tease me and leave me

Our eyes can't meet a second time

For my resistance is not that great

I'm dying inside, I can't come with you

So if you ever cared for me, Please...

Just leave..and Don't look back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/28/2009 11:00:00 AM
Excellent write Tyesha. I know the feeling all to well, sometimes you have to walk away.
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Date: 3/28/2009 7:06:00 AM
you captured that perfectly. I told someone nearly exactly that. no one ever tells you that when you fall in love you sign up to be tortured and torn between the wills of two
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Date: 3/26/2009 12:50:00 PM
Sometimes this seems to the very best way of saying goodbye and then moving on with ones only life! Eliminting perhaps the chains of binding and possibly residue; which holds only empty hope within our own dreams, towards a brigter and better future, towards what our tur hearts long for within our lives!? Excellent write dear Tyesha! Love and warmth always, John!:)
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:22:00 AM
I hear the crying out in this piece....heart breaking! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/26/2009 6:07:00 AM
So hard to be strong. Awesome write. I am feeling you. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/26/2009 5:28:00 AM
Ty sometimes you have to just fake it for a second or two then ta da its for real. In this poem I think she is gaining strength with every step he takes.
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Date: 3/26/2009 1:28:00 AM
Heart wrenching words Tyesha.Well written poemRgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:37:00 PM
i like this. i think everyone has felt like this at some stage.. nicely written :)
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